this one is nice too but i like the space one better.
suggestions for this are
1. again outline it with blue rather than white to blend. it gives a whole better look overall.
2. the black bar on top doesnt go too well with the background.
also if your bmps are coming darker, then why not upload the psds itself. in this way you will be allowing us to edit it and make it better for you.
keep up the good work
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